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June 22, 2009
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NIKON CORPORATION
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NIKON D60
Shutter Speed
1/250 second
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F/1.0
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200
Date Taken
Jun 21, 2009, 12:51:55 PM
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Kamila by AnitaSadowska Kamila by AnitaSadowska
Kamila
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What I like about this piece is that you've mixed two forms together, "grunge" with "fresh". You've put a fresh looking model (and by that I mean, there's clean clothes: no rips or tears, perfect hairstyle, pretty appearance) against a grungy background. This idea, like the model, is fresh and original, and I support you for that! :thumbsup: The focus is just right too :D

I colours I like, there's nothing too overly bright or colourful, though I do suggest toning down the yellow that you can see on the gate, it does distract a little from the model. You can easily do this in photoshop,so no worries there.

I think your only conern here is the way your model is posing. She's putting too much emphasis on pushing her breasts out. While in some photos this can be acceptable, I don't think it looks right with this picture. She looks a little stressed too, put under a little strain. It shows in the photo if your model is relaxed and comfortable with what they're doing. Foot placement here is also important, perhaps moving the bent leg a few inches forward would help to give a better impression.

But other than that, I can't see much fault. It's a pretty picture, you just need to get you models to relax! Keep up the good work!
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HasanG54 Sep 22, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
Wow great body, nice shot
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AnitaSadowska Jun 30, 2009  Student Photographer
senk ju:D
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:iconishootfashion:
She has a kick-ass figure, most definitely.
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AnitaSadowska Jun 23, 2009  Student Photographer
yeah, for sure!
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:iconroseisdarkness:
swietna glebia ostrosci... ^^

Kamila ma swietna figure! :)
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AnitaSadowska Jun 22, 2009  Student Photographer
oj tak, chudzinka z niej!

dziekuje:)
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:iconroseisdarkness:
moze i chudzinka ale naprawde fenomenalna figura!

wysoka jest?

a nie ma za co :) trzeba by sie zgadac na gg, co? :)
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AnitaSadowska Jun 24, 2009  Student Photographer
taka z 170:)

nooo kochana, przyjezdzam do Pl!:) trzeba sie spotkac koniecznie:)
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